Katrina Thornley

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Caterpillar in the Tree

I saw a caterpillar on a leaf, And for a moment I looked away. When I peered again, I found the leaf To be devoured. -K. Thornley

I saw a caterpillar on a leaf,
And for a moment I looked away.
When I peered again,
I found the leaf
To be devoured.

-K. Thornley

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Responses to “Caterpillar in the Tree”

  1. Harry

    This poem seems to me much longer than it is. The story goes on and on after the leaf is gone. Really neat little poem, and it left me thinking. It seems to me like all life. If you look away for a moment, it’s gone. Even though it’s all gone, it was still pretty yummy though.

    Good stuff.

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    1. seekatwriteblog

      I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for the feedback. I’m glad the message was transfered.

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  2. Rick. Wyman

    love
    it.

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  3. lexiebrookeblog

    Wow, great post! Short but definitely sweet, I really enjoyed reading this. I love your writing style as well, and this piece is so creative. Just found your blog and I can’t wait to read more.

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    1. seekatwriteblog

      Thank you so much!

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